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Posted by mrspageGOLD on August 28, 2009 at 4:24 PM
Could you view this and a couple of my other recordings and give me very honest opinions pls
pls copy and paste the links , thankyou to you all , i love this ss site , so many great people .
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Reply by SeanamonGOLD on September 9, 2009 at 9:20 PM
You Needed Me
The pitches were not bad, and from what I could tell your timbre was pleasant, but the mix was low. You did go flat a bit, but the background music tends to mask the clarity of your timbre.
Most of the pitches were spot on.
Your cadence, or timing and pacing of the vocals, were off somewhat, at times starting early or late, and that tends to weaken the rhythmic pace and impact...So I would really say that you should work at it in 3 areas:
1. Cadence
2. A few flat notes, in the middle of lines for example "and *held* me up..."
3. Mix and balance of the song
Overall, very respectable effort and I think if you close your eyes and feel the song more as you sing, you will have a powerful presentation.
Best,
Sean
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