Posted by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:08 PM
Do you really want to know how well you sang on a particular performance? I mean really...Do you? If you do you may post here. I'll hold nothing back. I will score you on a scale of 1-10 based on 2 categories. For a possible score of 20...(which is nearly unattainable.)
1. How well you stay on key. 2. The quality of your voice.
Please Specify if you would like you're scoring here or if you would rather have it sent to you in a private message.
OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!! WILL I EVER MAKE IT ? THE CRITICAL1 GAVE ME A 6 AND A 7.... NOW ITS YOUR TURN GO SING A SONG SO WE ALL CAN TELL YOU HOW YOU ARE AND THEN WHERE TO GO......LOL...THANKS BUDDY....... I'LL DO BETTER NEXT TIME...LOL....WALTER
Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:37 PM
walterweyburn wrote:OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!! WILL I EVER MAKE IT ? THE CRITICAL1 GAVE ME A 6 AND A 7.... NOW ITS YOUR TURN GO SING A SONG SO WE ALL CAN TELL YOU HOW YOU ARE AND THEN WHERE TO GO......LOL...THANKS BUDDY....... I'LL DO BETTER NEXT TIME...LOL....WALTER
DAMN YALL !!!! MY LIFE IS OVER THE CRITICAL1 DONT LIKE MY MUSIC....... AND I TRYED SO HARD.... OH WELL ITS A LOT OF SING SNAP LADIES THAT LIKES MY MUSIC.......LOL....
Okay, I'll put myself out there. I know I'm not up to par. Just want to hear what I need to work on so I at least hopefully get some advice that will help me improve to get people to comment after they listen. I usually don't get comments, just views. And that means there's something not right that they don't like.
Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:18 PM
MegaByte wrote:Okay, I'll put myself out there. I know I'm not up to par. Just want to hear what I need to work on so I at least hopefully get some advice that will help me improve to get people to comment after they listen. I usually don't get comments, just views. And that means there's something not right that they don't like.
HEY MAGABYTE AND DIVA, HE MUST LIKE YALL A LOT ITS TAKING LONGER THEN IT DID WITH ME.....LOL.... I LISTENED TO BOTH OF YALL AND I THING YALL DID AWSOME....(((BIG HUGS)))...WALTER
Wow... unexpected. I usually try to listen to other people and comment and i sometimes promote songs in the promote thread (like that song, in fact) and it just doesn't work. lol Oh well. I appreciate the feedback.
Kitty. You presented me with a unique problem. I couldn't tell how well you stayed on key through the entire song because the music volume was a bit high.
Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (n/a) 2. The quality of your voice. (10)
Total - (10 out of a possible 10)
From what I could hear you were on key but there were areas where it was difficult to discern. I do not judge for recording mix quality.
Kitty. You presented me with a unique problem. I couldn't tell how well you stayed on key through the entire song because the music volume was a bit high.
Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (n/a) 2. The quality of your voice. (10)
Total - (10 out of a possible 10)
From what I could hear you were on key but there were areas where it was difficult to discern. I do not judge for recording mix quality.
Reply by mgsactoPATRON on August 10, 2008 at 12:28 AM
mgsacto will be gone until at least wed. july 8th.. maybe longer.. darn
I HAVEN'T SEEN THIS UNTIL TODAY, BUT IT'S A FANTASTIC CONCEPT... I'M ACTUALLY OUT OF TOWN ON BUSINESS SO I CAN'T DO ANY SINGING. SO WHY NOT.? WELL HERE IS A ROUND 1 CONTEST ENTRY SUBMITTED A COUPLE OF DAYS AGO. GOT A LOT OF NICE COMMENTS BUT A LOT OF THEM ARE OBVIOUSLY FROM FRIENDS. DO YOU THINK I'LL BE MOVING ON TO ROUND 2 OR LOOKING FOR ANOTHER CONTEST.
BY THE WAY... I'VE HEARD DIVADAYNA AND SCORING HER IS ALMOST A NO BRAINER... SHE IS GOOD.
I'm nothing but curious lol.. if you go through my other recordings, most are mellow and toned down.. So I tried something different, care to take a listen and tell me what ya think Mr. Critical guy? :P
1. How well you stayed on key. (7) 2. The quality of your voice. (7)
Total - (14)
There were areas in your performance where you seemed a little shaky and lacking in confidence. 14 is a good score but I believe you are capable of doing better.
Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 1:09 AM
mgsacto wrote:I HAVEN'T SEEN THIS UNTIL TODAY, BUT IT'S A FANTASTIC CONCEPT... I'M ACTUALLY OUT OF TOWN ON BUSINESS SO I CAN'T DO ANY SINGING. SO WHY NOT.? WELL HERE IS A ROUND 1 CONTEST ENTRY SUBMITTED A COUPLE OF DAYS AGO. GOT A LOT OF NICE COMMENTS BUT A LOT OF THEM ARE OBVIOUSLY FROM FRIENDS. DO YOU THINK I'LL BE MOVING ON TO ROUND 2 OR LOOKING FOR ANOTHER CONTEST.
BY THE WAY... I'VE HEARD DIVADAYNA AND SCORING HER IS ALMOST A NO BRAINER... SHE IS GOOD.
Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 1:19 AM
TheBigRyo wrote:I'm nothing but curious lol.. if you go through my other recordings, most are mellow and toned down.. So I tried something different, care to take a listen and tell me what ya think Mr. Critical guy? :P
Reply by charswebGOLD on August 10, 2008 at 1:56 AM
Ok I want to submit one more that I thought turned out pretty good---but I know it truly is knowing what is a good fit for your voice---------help! :))
I would still like results in a PM
Thank you so much---it is good to hear constructive thoughts for improvement.
Posted by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:08 PM
Do you really want to know how well you sang on a particular performance? I mean really...Do you?
If you do you may post here. I'll hold nothing back.
I will score you on a scale of 1-10 based on 2 categories. For a possible score of 20...(which is nearly unattainable.)
1. How well you stay on key.
2. The quality of your voice.
Please Specify if you would like you're scoring here or if you would rather have it sent to you in a private message.
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Reply by walterweyburnGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 6:16 PM
OK GIVE IT TO ME I CAN TAKE IT...
"http://www.singsnap.com/snap/e/b0999269"
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:29 PM
Maybe when your phone rang you should have actually STOPPED singing to answer it.
For not answering your phone you receive a 0.
I can't put my finger on it. You seem to have used some artistic license that made your performance quite loose.
1. How well you stayed on key. (6)
2. The quality of your voice. (7)
Total - (13)
I think you can do much better.
Thank you.
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Reply by walterweyburnGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 6:35 PM
OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!! WILL I EVER MAKE IT ? THE CRITICAL1 GAVE ME A 6 AND A 7.... NOW ITS YOUR TURN GO SING A SONG SO WE ALL CAN TELL YOU HOW YOU ARE AND THEN WHERE TO GO......LOL...THANKS BUDDY....... I'LL DO BETTER NEXT TIME...LOL....WALTER
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:37 PM
My pleasure.
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Reply by walterweyburnGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 6:37 PM
OK DO YOUR THING AGAIN....
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/bf12eaeed
THIS IS FUN......AND YOU DONT EVEN SING....LOL...
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:39 PM
I have an extensive background in music Sir and Yes I am a singer and a musician.
Now, off with me to listen to this next project of yours..
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 6:47 PM
Yes. That was a bit worse than your first submission.
1. How well you stayed on key. (5)
2. The quality of your voice. (7)
Total - (12)
Thank you.
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Reply by walterweyburnGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 6:50 PM
DAMN YALL !!!! MY LIFE IS OVER THE CRITICAL1 DONT LIKE MY MUSIC....... AND I TRYED SO HARD.... OH WELL ITS A LOT OF SING SNAP LADIES THAT LIKES MY MUSIC.......LOL....
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Reply by MegaByte on August 9, 2008 at 6:59 PM
Okay, I'll put myself out there. I know I'm not up to par. Just want to hear what I need to work on so I at least hopefully get some advice that will help me improve to get people to comment after they listen. I usually don't get comments, just views. And that means there's something not right that they don't like.
My latest...
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/watchAndListen/play/bca42f2d
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:05 PM
I'm off to listen to your performance Megabyte.
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Reply by DivaDaynaGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 7:08 PM
Woah...scary...ok deep breathes..and YES go for it! I'll only be mad for a little bit lol! You do listen all the way through right?
When You Are Old - Gretchen Peters
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/b3a9aced
Go ahead and post it! :)
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:18 PM
Shawn... Here are your scores.
1. How well you stayed on key. (9)
2. The quality of your voice. (10)
Total - (19)
This was a very good performance. If you're not getting comments it's most likely simply due to the fact that there aren't enough people hearing you.
You should definitely enter some contests. That will get you heard by many...and many need to hear you.
You also might consider submitting songs on some of the popular threads in the "Promote Yourself" category of SingSnap.
Thank you.
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Reply by walterweyburnGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 7:18 PM
HEY MAGABYTE AND DIVA, HE MUST LIKE YALL A LOT ITS TAKING LONGER THEN IT DID WITH ME.....LOL.... I LISTENED TO BOTH OF YALL AND I THING YALL DID AWSOME....(((BIG HUGS)))...WALTER
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:19 PM
I'm off to listen to your performance.
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Reply by MegaByte on August 9, 2008 at 7:20 PM
Wow... unexpected. I usually try to listen to other people and comment and i sometimes promote songs in the promote thread (like that song, in fact) and it just doesn't work. lol Oh well. I appreciate the feedback.
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Reply by Kitty987GOLD on August 9, 2008 at 7:22 PM
Kitty987 happy 4th!!! be safe everyone! =) goin up north........ok...let me have it!
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/bb12d652e
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:29 PM
Here are your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (10)
2. The quality of your voice. (10)
Total - (20)
Dayna. You totally owned that song and your performance was brilliant. I don't have anything else to say.
Thank you.
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Reply by DivaDaynaGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 7:31 PM
AH!!!! OMG! Thanks....I was totally nervous over that! Come on tho..there had to be SOMEthing bad! Well anyway thanks so much! :)
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:46 PM
Kitty. You presented me with a unique problem. I couldn't tell how well you stayed on key through the entire song because the music volume was a bit high.
Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (n/a)
2. The quality of your voice. (10)
Total - (10 out of a possible 10)
From what I could hear you were on key but there were areas where it was difficult to discern. I do not judge for recording mix quality.
From what I could hear you sang well.
Thank you.
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Reply by MIZLIZPATRON on August 9, 2008 at 7:51 PM
okay here goes..
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/bc11b3e95
let me know..
:)
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 7:52 PM
I will be off for a bit. I'll get to every submission when I return.
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Reply by Kitty987GOLD on August 9, 2008 at 8:00 PM
Kitty987 happy 4th!!! be safe everyone! =) goin up north........Well thank you critical! =)
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 9, 2008 at 8:31 PM
Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (10)
2. The quality of your voice. (10)
Total - (20)
Almost unattainable. 20.
This is the standard by which all are judged. I've nothing else to say.
Thank you.
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Reply by MIZLIZPATRON on August 9, 2008 at 8:36 PM
Well...I am flattered..
thank you Simon, I mean..Critical1
:)
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Reply by pic1061GOLD on August 9, 2008 at 8:41 PM
pic1061 happy 4th of july!!!Ok:) I will give this a try! I am not a professional singer but I surely enjoy trying..
Bad Company
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/b912b6c92
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Reply by DECbutterflywingsGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 10:03 PM
DECbutterflywings happy 4th of july...god bless the u.s.a.OK..I'M HERE...WALTER SENT ME..
NOW TELL ME HOW BAD I AM...
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/watchandlisten/play/aa10820f3
AT LEAST I TRY...WITH A SMILE..
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Reply by walterweyburnGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 10:22 PM
babe it dont matter what he says he is just one person.... and i love your music....... big hugs sweetheart
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Reply by DECbutterflywingsGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 10:25 PM
DECbutterflywings happy 4th of july...god bless the u.s.a.THANK YOU HUN..YOU KNOW ME IT'S GOT TO BE COUNTRY OR BUST...
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Reply by redelleGOLD on August 9, 2008 at 11:11 PM
Be brutal please!
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/b1a0e411
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Reply by mickie1086GOLD on August 9, 2008 at 11:22 PM
I'm game...
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/b0ebefb3
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Reply by mickie1086GOLD on August 9, 2008 at 11:26 PM
oh, and you can rate me publically.
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Reply by mgsactoPATRON on August 10, 2008 at 12:28 AM
mgsacto will be gone until at least wed. july 8th.. maybe longer.. darnI HAVEN'T SEEN THIS UNTIL TODAY, BUT IT'S A FANTASTIC CONCEPT... I'M ACTUALLY OUT OF TOWN ON BUSINESS SO I CAN'T DO ANY SINGING. SO WHY NOT.? WELL HERE IS A ROUND 1 CONTEST ENTRY SUBMITTED A COUPLE OF DAYS AGO. GOT A LOT OF NICE COMMENTS BUT A LOT OF THEM ARE OBVIOUSLY FROM FRIENDS. DO YOU THINK I'LL BE MOVING ON TO ROUND 2 OR LOOKING FOR ANOTHER CONTEST.
BY THE WAY... I'VE HEARD DIVADAYNA AND SCORING HER IS ALMOST A NO BRAINER... SHE IS GOOD.
HERE IS MINE
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/b81070289
AND I'LL TAKE MY MEDICINE PUBLIC ....MIKE
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Reply by TheBigRyo on August 10, 2008 at 12:36 AM
I'm nothing but curious lol.. if you go through my other recordings, most are mellow and toned down.. So I tried something different, care to take a listen and tell me what ya think Mr. Critical guy? :P
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/b2f1967b
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 12:38 AM
Pic. Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (5)
2. The quality of your voice. (7)
Total - (12)
It's quite alright to have fun and sing. You're voice quality is decent and pitch is improvable so keep it up.
The lead guitarist played very well.
Thank you.
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Reply by TheBigRyo on August 10, 2008 at 12:44 AM
yay he's back lol
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 12:45 AM
And try you did.
Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (8)
2. The quality of your voice. (6)
Total - (14)
Voice quality can differ depending upon several factors. Choosing a song in a key that is right for your voice is vital.
Thank you.
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 12:55 AM
redelle. Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (7)
2. The quality of your voice. (7)
Total - (14)
There were areas in your performance where you seemed a little shaky and lacking in confidence. 14 is a good score but I believe you are capable of doing better.
Thank you.
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Reply by TheBigRyo on August 10, 2008 at 12:59 AM
oh god im so excited my critique is 3 away :P
hopefully he overlooks the fact that i messed up the first chorus and don't have gold options (echo, etc.) blahh lol
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 1:00 AM
Mickie.
1. How well you stayed on key. (9)
2. The quality of your voice. (8)
Total - (17)
This was a good performance.
Thank you.
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 1:09 AM
I can't answer your question about moving to the next round of your contest without hearing all the others but this was a decent performance.
Mike. Your scores:
1. How well you stayed on key. (7)
2. The quality of your voice. (6)
Total - (13)
Thank you.
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Reply by mgsactoPATRON on August 10, 2008 at 1:14 AM
mgsacto will be gone until at least wed. july 8th.. maybe longer.. darnTHANKS I'LL KEEP PRACTICING. SOMETHING TO SHOOT FOR.
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Reply by mickie1086GOLD on August 10, 2008 at 1:17 AM
thank you...
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 1:19 AM
Right. There is quite a large number of words in that song. Impressive how you got them all in.
1. How well you stayed on key. (5)
2. The quality of your voice. (6)
Total - (11)
I would like to hear you sing something that isn't so choppy and with more melody so that it might be easier to assess your skill level.
Thank you.
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Reply by charswebGOLD on August 10, 2008 at 1:26 AM
I too think this is a good idea and it helps to know what needs work...........
I think I might the results in a PM please.
Thank you...........
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/be12133a9
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Reply by TheCritical1 on August 10, 2008 at 1:43 AM
Done.
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Reply by charswebGOLD on August 10, 2008 at 1:56 AM
Ok I want to submit one more that I thought turned out pretty good---but I know it truly is knowing what is a good fit for your voice---------help! :))
I would still like results in a PM
Thank you so much---it is good to hear constructive thoughts for improvement.
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/add6c159
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Reply by bipolarbettyPATRON on August 10, 2008 at 3:46 AM
bipolarbetty i love my husband so much...paddy19...mine forever... :o)The song is "Dream A Little Dream of Me" (using the new stereo feature.
It is the French version from the movie:
"French Kiss" starring Meg Ryan
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/ba125858d
Thank you for listening!
Merci très beaucoup
(please leave my critique scores on here, I'm a bit insecure)
Duh...I'm asking for honesty...go figure.
LOL
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Reply by RylieghsgramGOLD on August 10, 2008 at 11:19 AM
Rylieghsgram happy 4th of july!...thank you vets and all military!flagging for the future..maybe...
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Reply by DebMorganGOLD on August 10, 2008 at 11:23 AM
DebMorgan wishes her friends a safe & happy 4th! thank a soldier today!LOL, you know you want to!
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Reply by RylieghsgramGOLD on August 10, 2008 at 11:25 AM
Rylieghsgram happy 4th of july!...thank you vets and all military!ok, here is mine..
http://www.singsnap.com/snap/r/aba6a0c1
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