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On August 20, 2015
singingaljax & masse4life 70
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by Jackie and John~
Thanks for the listens. This is a meaningful piece~
Thank you john for helping me put this song together.. What a great job you did.
Below are the words of my original poem and we turned into a song~So the words got switched up a bit..Either way My original words with johns help of music and suggestions. You're awesome~ THANKSSSSSSSSSSSS
THAT MOMENTBy Jackie HThat moment when you touched my life.That moment when I never wanted you to leave my side.That moment i cried so hard or felt broken insideThat moment i didn't want to say goodbye.I love you so much and hurt at the same time.Nobody can understand the pain i feel insideWherever you are you always have a placeDeep inside my heart that i can't erase.No matter if we saw each other day by dayI know you loved me even the same.You are gone and it takes time to comprehendLoving you grows stronger with no endThat moment you were gone i just knewThat it was real and i had to believe it too.That moment that your pain was goneI knew you were in a place where you belonged.Say hello to all the loved ones and hug them for meHave them do the same for you from meI can't express what you mean to meI can't express how you touched so many livesI just want to express you were always loving and didn't think twice.No matter the reason you filled our life with joyYou laughed,you cried,and you never left anyone behind you were so very nice.Only to notice that moment is stillWishing i could hug you one last timeWishing i didn't have to say byeWIshing i spent more time with youWishing you knew how much i cared for you.No matter how you touched my lifeNo matter who you were in my lifeYou loved me no matter what.The words you told me will always stayDeep inside me and reminded on my bad days.Your sweet spirit that everyone knewWill guide and keep me going through Never giving up hope to see you againBecause that is eternity my friendI know where you are and so glad of that.Thank you heavenly father for sharing with meAn angel who loved so many unconditionally.Because of that moment it helps when you went awayBeing able to look Brighter each day.As you listen to my words and see my tearsI love you forever and will not fearFor one day we will be together We will always stay close togetherBut now as you part for a short timeKnow that others you touched in your lifeWill remember you too and we all stick togetherBecause you taught to love one another and we all belong together forever.Till we meet again i want you to know loving you never endsTill we meet again my wonderful friend.....
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WOW WOWThis I Beautiful Jackie and Johnlistening here
Now that was so Beautiful Jackie. and John did an awesome job on the MusicI really loved this. and the lyrics are so heart touchingwowCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC........................................ Michael
Hmmm it was my pleasure to help you put together a beautiful song. The words are truly more beautiful than the music but together they complete a song!!!! A masterpiece even!! So beautiful!!!! Ty for taking the time to complete this project with me you truly are a great friend!!!!!!!
Great Song and Sing. :) :)
So beautiful . Sad yet so lovely . Jackie tis is the best I have heard from you . So much passion and emotion in this. WOW is the only thing I can say . God Bless . Great job u2 YF always Beth
This is amazing love this thanks for singing and putting the words for us many starssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss and to your friend John for helping you with this amazing song ********************************** Helen
This is amazing. Totally blew me away xxxxxxxx
what beautiful lyrics and singing!!! this was totally awesome! great voice!!! so glad I got to hear this!!
you and your friend John done a super job !!!totally loved it
Wishing all my ss friend a very eary merry Christmas
hello jackie&johnwow wow beautyful duet togatherenjoying this stars***********************************************thank you for the sweet comment hug wilma button push
Just beautiful Jackie!! I loved it!!!
Loved this Jackieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Great job Jackie!! You are a very talented songwriter!
Hey sweetie, listenin
Jackie, this was so heartfelt and beautiful!!!What a masterpiece you have here dear!This was so sad, but so incredible sweetness!Hugs to you!!!!!
Hello, Jackie and John.
How beautiful and sacred this song, in lyrics and melody. It is in my heart now.
May the sweet spirit of CHristmass STAYS IN our HEARTs the whole year through *L*
WOW!!!! Soooo love the lyrics very insightful, meaningful message!!!! AWESOME collaboration with your friend Jackie!!!!! BRILLIANT!!!!! Very L*O*V*E*L*Y*.....Thank you so much for sharing your WONDERFUL talents!!!! it!!!!
I never forgot about this!... and I had already listened to it then got sidetracked but never commented, so I'm back to listen again and comment this time!
This is really beautiful and heartfelt!.....
..you're a wonderful writer!... and I love the backing music to go with your lyrics too!...
I really enjoyed this!...
I had to come back for a listen and visit . I have this saved in my favorites. It is amazing . You have a talent like none other . So does John . Ty for sharing . Love u Your Friend always Beth
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