a country song I wrote

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angelicbratLEVEL 73

Post by angelicbratGOLD

http://www.singsnap.com/karaoke/watchandlisten/play/bc80a7feb

This is called past your issues and it's come from a personal place, struggling to understand or relate to my dad who hides behind his causes.

My father, loving you has been hard
You need more when I was too tired,
But I know you didn’t mean me harm
But your care was a cause for the alarm.

My father, I know you really do care,
But your caring is too strong to bear,
Hard and heavy like a metal swing ball
And I won’t let it break down my walls.

Papa, I wish you could see past your issues,
Open your mind not a packet of dang tissues,
Maybe one day you’ll see from my view
And see that other people are good too.

Oh one day Papa, I hope you come to see
That the world is ready, the planet be free,
Sure mankind have broken the place down
But there’s good as well as bad, so look around.

Papa, I wish you could see past your issues,
Open your mind not a packet of dang tissues,
Maybe one day you’ll see from my view
And see that other people are good too.

VirginiaMorrisLEVEL 2

Reply by VirginiaMorris

Very interesting tip. I will learn alot from here
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rj32LEVEL 41

Reply by rj32GOLD

Have you recorded this?

angelicbratLEVEL 73

Reply by angelicbratGOLD

yes I did

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