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starfire411LEVEL 94

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FOR ANYONE WHO IS AN ORIGINAL SS SONG WRITER WHO IS TRYING TO COME UP WITH LYRICS FOR A NEW SONG...I AM SHARING MY POETRY FOR SONG IDEAS HERE, ANYONE IS MORE THAN WELCOME TO USE ANY OF THEM..PICK APART OR HOWEVER YOU WISH TO USE THEM IS FINE WITH ME... I WROTE ALOT OF THESE YEARS AGO FOR A FRIEND THAT NEEDED SONG IDEAS SO IF ANYONE WANTS TO USE THEM FEEL FREE TO DO SO...SOME MAY NOT MAKE SENSE BUT I KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO GET WRITERS BLOCK...I JUST WASN'T TO SURE WHERE TO POST THIS BUT I HAVE ALOT SO I WILL BE ADDING MORE IF NO-ONE CARES FOR ME TO DO THIS AND IF ANYONE ELSE WANTS TO SHARE THEIRS AND DOES NOT MIND SOMEONE USING THEM IN A SONG PLEASE FEEL FREE TO DO SO...I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR SOME OF THESE IN A SONG...THANK YOU AND I HOPE SOMEONE CAN USE THEM....

starfire411LEVEL 94

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ANGELIC FACE

She feels emptiness, she feels cold
Fallen in a dark cold world
No escape, no where to hide
She lays herself down and cries
Oh….a lost soul, that no one feels
An angelic face, that no one sees
In the darkness, a shattered heart
A lifetime of love never seized
She lies down beneath a willow tree
Whispering amongst the starry sky
For an angel of mercy to carry her away
From all the pain she carries inside
Oh….a lost soul, that no one feels
An angelic face, that no one sees
In the darkness, a shattered heart
A lifetime of love never seized
She found her peace beneath that tree
Upon that night an angel found her there
Carried her soul from the fallen world
Loves embrace had set her free
Written: 2015 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411

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FOR LOVE OF AN ANGEL

If I held an angel in my arms, would I become the fallen one?
Wrapped in heavenly wings, till dawn awoke the morning sun
If I opened my heart to love, only to fall from grace
Then I would fall from the highest for one nights embrace

I have been waiting my whole life for a love such as this
A breath of a heavenly soul joined with just one kiss
Breaking all the rules just to be close to you
Heaven could never deny this love so pure and true

Oh my angel, Oh my light, My safe haven I seek
Come to me now and wipe away my tears
And hold on to me, and never let me fall, wrap me safe and keep me warm
For you’re my angel, my light, my safe haven I seek

Judgment day came to call and took my angel away
My heart was shattered as I watched in dismay
A love like ours they did deny to be real
But heaven could never understand the way I feel

Oh my angel, Oh my light, my safe haven I seek
Come back to me now and wipe away my tears
And hold on to me, never let me fall, wrap me safe and keep me warm
For you’re my angel, my light, my safe haven I seek
Written: 2001 by Cynthia Bartels { starfire411

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WITH A SMILE

The sky turned cold, dark with despair, my fears became more than I could bare
My eyes wide open although I did not see, an angel was right there watching over me.
I laid me down to sleep that night, my soul was set free for heavens light
I laid me down for an eternal sleep, my tired ole eyes no more did they weep.
Wrapped in heavenly wings of an angels love, my soul shall forever walk the shores above
Hand in hand with thee this day, forever in the light of heavens display.
Loved ones I left behind, I’ll see once more, for someday they to will walk the heavenly shore
So remember me this way it’s only for alittle while, so remember me this way.
I’m your angel, your angel looking down upon you with a smile, oh hear the angels sing
I’ll be here forever, once again someday you’ll see me, till then remember I’m your angel,
I’m your angel looking down upon you…..
Written: 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411

starfire411LEVEL 94

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SUMMER RAIN

Memories flood my mind as I was driving by your old place
Our favorite song played on the radio as I began to unwind
Thinking back to good ole days when we were young and free
Not a care in the world there was only you and me
We used to dance out in the summer rain
Shared our love together just down this little lane
Strolled along side by side your hand in mine vowed to be together til the end of time
Your smile I always see, your love would wake me at night
Wishing you were here right now to hold me tight
I pulled over and found myself before you
and kneeling down before you I bowed my head and prayed
Oh summer rain bring my baby back to me
Summer rain bring me my rainbow and let me find the end
So I can find my pot of old to bring her back again
Let me see her smile again and to dance in that summer rain
And make love under the stars like we used to way back when
Oh summer rain bring my baby back back to me
I’ll never understand why she left me this way, our love was for an eternity
But she’s gone to heaven and left me here all alone
Oh summer rain
Oh summer rain bring my baby back to me
Written :1998 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411

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YOU’LL NEVER

No matter what I say You never hear my words
No matter what I do It’s never good enough for you
When you look in my eyes, Can’t you see the pain inside?
Oh can’t you see, Why can’t you see me?

I’d pick a star from the heavens above
I’d climb a mountain and cross the world
But no matter how where or how far
No nothing is ever good enough for you

Everytime I turn around, you knock me down
Can’t tell you how I feel, Because you never hear my words
Many times I’ve tried to forget but this old stubborn heart won’t change
And that maybe you’d come around in time
I’m just a fool to ever believe that someday you’ll really see me

I’d pick a star from the heavens above
I’d climb a mountain and cross the world
But no matter how where, no matter how far
No nothing will ever be good enough for you
Just a fool to ever believe that someday you would ever see the real me
Written: 2001 Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411 }

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STORMS

There’s a storm brewing this summers eve
clouds roll in like smoke from a fire
Lightening flashes as the thunder clashes
she knows he’s not alone, he’s just another liar
The rain pours strong as the storm rages on
Another late night at the office or so he said
Wondering where the love went wrong
As images flash of them, as she stares at her cold empty bed
There’s a storm brewin this summers eve
Cloude roll in like smoke from a fire
Lightening flashes as the thunder crashes
She knows he’s just another liar
The rain pours strong as the storm rages on
Dinner sits cold in the oven as he finally walks in
Distinct aroma of perfume and cigarettes linger
She looked at him with that storm in her eyes
Pulled the wedding band from her finger
and walked out into the storm and set herself free
There’s a storm brewin this summers eve
Clouds roll in like smoke from a fire
Lightening crashes as the thunder crashes
She knows he’s alone now, he’s just another liar
The rain pours strong as the storm rages on
Written: 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411

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PAPA’S AN ANGEL

I was just a child then but I can still recall
Me and my ole papa outside playing ball
The night came callin as papa tucked me in
And whispered as he kissed me son where do I begin
Now papa was a strong man but gentle as the rain
And he talked to me softly as I drifted off to sleep
That night I dreamed of angels and papa was standing there
Smiling down at me and said remember these words I share
There’s always an angel that walks beside you
They’re always protecting you no matter where
So remember me my son and I always will of you
And that whenever you need me I’ll be right there
With all my love to you and mama each day
Cause angels never ever go away
The morning sun arose I could hear mama crying
As she laid there across the bed, to tell me she kept trying
I put my arms around her and kissed her sweet head
And told her of the dream and what papa had said
There’s always an angel that walks beside us
They’re always protecting us no matter where
So remember him with love and he will of us
And that whenever we need him he’ll be right there
Cause angels never ever go away
Written : 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411

beeveeLEVEL 80

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Oh my!!!What a gift u have......

starfire411LEVEL 94

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DEVILISH TRADE

The devil stood there before me say’s little lady what can I do for you
I ain’t asking for much of nothing just a cost of your soul will do
I can make you rich and famous, give you a mansion on the hill
Load you down with diamonds and pearls and never have to pay anymore bills
I can cover you in minks and stoles, give you a big fancy limousine
Make you look like a beauty queen and put you on the cover of a magazine
But I ain’t asking for much of nothing just the cost of your soul will do
I just looked up at him and smiled and said
These things are not worth burnin for an eternity
because money ain’t everything
I’d rather keep my soul and die poor broke than make a deal with the likes of you

Didn’t really finish this one but it gives you some ideas I hope

starfire411LEVEL 94

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

thank you very much i just hope someone can use these and maybe make them into songs that would really be nice...

starfire411LEVEL 94

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JOHNNY NO GOOD

Johnny was a mean one who was born and bred
Way down in the back woods rotten to the core the townsfolk said
He’d steal you blind and just smile and say
Thank you very much and have a good day
He loved to fight and dirty indeed
Shoot you in the back just to see you bleed
Johnny was an outlaw the meanest around
Til a sheriff came in and put ole Johnny down
Townsfolk placed a stone where ole Johnny now lies
And wrote in these words as they smiled and cheered goodbye
Johnny wasn’t no angel, Johnny wasn’t no good
Who was born and bred way down in the back woods
Johnny was an outlaw the meanest around
Till a sheriff came in and put ole Johnny down
Now the townsfolk relieved to see ole Johnny deceived
To live in fear no more coz ole Johnny now lies 6 ft. deep
Written: 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411}

starfire411LEVEL 94

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Wrap me up, lay me down, make love to me
The whole night through, let me see, if your hearts really true
So wrap me up, lay me down, whisper those sweet words
I long to hear from you, let me know if your loves really true
So wrap me up lay me down take me out paint the town
The whole night round, let me fall in love with you
And then tell me you feel that way to
So wrap me up lay me down make love to me the whole night through
So wrap me up lay me down make love to me the whole night through
Wrap me up wrap me up
And lay me down
Written 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411}

This was suppose to be more of a fast upbeat song when it was written for a friend that is why it kind repeats itself so you can add or take away......

starfire411LEVEL 94

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SECRET VALENTINE

A heart covered card I received today, who it was from
it didn’t say, just a brief message to say to me
Dear valentine
I’ve waited a long, long time to give this to you
Meet me tonight for a valentines dance
Don’t wait to long or you’ll miss your chance
Later that evening a candle lit for two
Roses and candy and a cozy little table for two
I sat waiting for a whirlwind romance
To be with my true love for a valentines dance
As she entered the room I was so amazed
Oh how beautiful she was I had praised
Long curly hair and eyes of blue
A smile came over me coz this lovely lady I knew
She ran to me with open arms and said
Silly daddy I’m your secret valentine
I’ve waited a long, long time to dance with you
Cause I’m that special someone that loves you true
Hand in hand her tiny feet upon mine
She was my date on this day of valentines
We danced the evening away til it was late
Asleep in my arms I held my valentines date
My sweet darling little daughter of only 5
That makes me so very happy to be alive
As I put her to bed and kissed her sweet head
She muttered out daddy I love you and I’ll always be your secret valentine
Written 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411}

by far this is my all time favorite...we don't have very many valentine day songs

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GENTLEMAN COWBOY

He may not be rich but he sure turns me on like a switch
He may not drive a fancy car but he sure drives my heart
To a point of no return
He’s my gentleman cowboy and he’s mine, and he’s all I’ll ever need
He may not be like Hercules but he sure brings me to my knees
His heart is as big as the ocean and he sets my love in motion
To a point of no return
He’s my gentleman cowboy and he’s mine and he’s all I’ll ever need
When I’m sad he can make me smile
When I cry he holds me tenderly for awhile
He knows what I need without asking of
He knows how to treat a lady and show her real love
To a point of no return
He’s my gentleman cowboy
I would not trade him for the world cause he is all I will ever need
Written 2001 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411}

starfire411LEVEL 94

Edited reply by starfire411GOLD +3

My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

AS YOU CAN TELL BY THE DATE I HAVE HAD THESE TUCKED AWAY IN A DRAWER FOR MANY YEARS I WOULD LIKE TO SHARE THEM WITH WHOMEVER WISHES TO READ THEM OR WANT TO USE THEM FOR SONG WRITING....I HOPE IT WILL HELP SOMEONE TO EITHER BE ABLE TO USE ANY OF THE MATERIAL OR AT LEAST IDEAS FROM THEM FOR THEIR SONGS...I WOULD RATHER SEE THEM GET USED FOR IDEAS RATHER THAN SIT IN THE DRAWER FOR ANOTHER CENTURY...LOL

WildFlower68

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I have bits and pieces of song lyrics and poems jotted down all over my house...
I start a thought....and then sometimes get writer's block and never complete them. This is an amazing gift that you have shared with us here!! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poetry!! I hope to find some time in the following weeks to "mesh" our words together in an original song!! This is a fantastic gift of generosity!!

starfire411LEVEL 94

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that would be fantastic, i hope somebody can make something really beautiful out of all this...lol....i have more that i am going to add, would really love to help someone be able to complete or create their song......i have been writing since i can remember, but never really got to do anything with them so i figured someone else might be able to...

starfire411LEVEL 94

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A WOMAN KNOWS
Is there another woman who stole your heart away?
Or is it just my imagination that you don't look at me the same way
We don't make love anymore or hold each other in a loves embrace
Is it just my imagination or is there someone else who takes my place
When you look in my eyes it's not really me you see
how can you just stand there and keep lying to me
cause i know deep in my heart there's another who's arms you really wanna be
Is she really what you want, make up your mind before you leave
cause it's not my imagination that our love was only make believe
Just don't come back around cause i cant take the hurt anymore
and its not my imagination that your love has let me down
when you look in my eyes its not me you really see
how can you just stand there and keep lying to me
cause a woman knows when its time to set love free
written 2002 By Cynthia Bartels { Starfire411 }

starfire411LEVEL 94

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here is one for either a christmas song or a gospel song or both but didn't get it finished but someone might be able to get it done......

on christmas eve the stars shown down
on this little town called Bethlehem
a miracle of gods precious love
to mankind true peace was finally found
listen as the heavenly choir rejoices
as it fills the air and hearts around
united the whole world with just that night
to come together to celebrate his life
let us all sing in peace and harmony
and never forget what cost he paid
for baby jesus is why we celebrate his birth
and to never forget his holy sacrifice.....

starfire411LEVEL 94

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FOR ANYONE WHO IS ABLE TO USE ANY PARTS OF THESE POEMS TO BUILD A SONG I DO NOT WISH TO TAKE CREDIT AT ALL I JUST WOULD LOVE TO HEAR THE SONG YOU ARE ABLE TO CREATE THAT WOULD BE AN HONOR FOR ME......

beeveeLEVEL 80

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I'm working on Angelic Heart.......Will post link when I'm all done....Thanks so much....

starfire411LEVEL 94

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WHEN YOU GET A SONG COMPLETE WOULD LOVE TO POST IT TO THE SS ORIGINAL SONGWRITERS STAGE AT THE ASTRAL THEATER CONCERT HALL......

beeveeLEVEL 80

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Oops Angelic Face..... I'll be sure to post it....

starfire411LEVEL 94

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WE NEED MORE SONGS LIKE ANOTHER DAY FOR ME AND YOU IN PARADISE
AN IDEA FOR AN AWARENESS TYPE SONG.....
a city inside the alley ways of the streets
cardboard boxes and piles of newspaper
faces that no-one seems to want to meet
just thrown away like yesterday's garbage
lost frightened souls scattered throughout
just longing to belong somewhere once more
no-one ever seems to hear them shout
"can anyone help me find my way"
cries of desperation and dispair
but no-one ever wants to understand
the world can be so cruel and unfair
to those who seem to suffer the most
they are human to and deserve to be heard
not to ignore or to misunderstand
but to listen to their stories every word
and let's all do what we can to lend a hand

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FRIENDSHIP
A friend is someone who's always there no matter what, when or where
To be there when your down to pick you up and fix your frown
To be your ear for your heart-aches to hold you through the heartbreaks
To talk about all the good times and through all the bad times
To do lots of things together in all seasonal weather
To laugh and have fun and even when the day is done
I'll still be your friend far or near, a friend for life, a friend so dear

Friends forever through good and bad
Sisters to cherish and keep through happy and sad
Friends are there when all is lost
No distance to far no matter the cost
Friendship is sacred a sturdy rock to stand
Friendship is stronger when we take each others hand
If you ever need me just call my name and you I'll do the same
Even after time has reached its end
I'll know in heaven awaits my dearest friend

these are 2 short ones that maybe can be meshed together or however way it can be used

starfire411LEVEL 94

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PLEASE COME BACK
The past for which it's gone was full of joy and also pain
Yet these memories linger on, the ones of you and me remain
All the times we fussed and fought still brings tears to my eyes
Through all those years I'd always thought,
you'd loved me enough to never end in goodbye
Friends keep telling me I'm a fool, to get my life back on track
But I can't keep my mind off lovin you so give us a second chance baby,
Oh won't you please come back
All the times we laughed and loved, still warms this ole foolish heart
But when it came to push or shove,you pushed your love from me apart
Friends keep telling me I'm a fool, but I can't keep my mind off lovin you
So give us one more try,baby come on home tonight
Please give our love just one more try....
Written 2001

starfire411LEVEL 94

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MAMA'S LETTER
Just swingin on the front porch holding hands
Hoping someday you would be my man
Mama kept saying you were no good
But I didn't listen cause only I understood
A few months later you got on bended knee
and asked my mama if you could marry me
She kept shaking her head in so much disbelief
and kept telling me you would only bring me grief
Mama I should have listened to your advice
That he was no good, I thought he was different, I thought he was nice
I married a stranger that turned cold as ice
The first time he said he was sorry so dear
and I believed that he was truly sincere
When it happened again I was afraid to leave
I waited to long and now it's too late
So I'm sending you this message from heaven's gate
Mama I should've listened to your advice
That he was no good, I thought he was different, I thought he was nice
But mama he became a stranger that turned cold as ice
written 2000

starfire411LEVEL 94

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SIMPLE THINGS
Don't buy me roses it don't mean a thing to me
Go out to a field of wildflowers and pick them for free
Cause simple things mean the world to me
Don't waste your money on diamonds and pearls
Just paint your affection on a life size mural
Don't ask me any questions if you are not willing to hear
Listen closely to my heart and hold me when I need you dear
Cause simple things mean the world to me
I'm just a simple woman who wants a simple man
Not everything in the world that money can buy
Don't need no diamonds or pearls, furs or a caddy
Just a simple good-hearted man that a child can proudly call her daddy
All I ask is that you just relax and give yourself to me
Don't buy me satin sheets or a fancy made bed
Make love to me under a blanket of stars instead
Cause simple things mean the world to me
Don't make love to me then roll over and go to sleep
Just hold me close the whole night through, love me deep
Don't take me out to some fancy made resturaunt
Just take me on a picnic and a stroll through the park
Cause simple things mean the world to me
I'm just a simple woman who wants a simple man
Not everything in the world that money can buy
Don't need no diamonds or pearls, furs or a caddy
Just a simple good-hearted man a child can proudly call her daddy
All I ask is that you just relax and give yourself to me
Cause a simple life with you is all i'll ever need
Written 2001

starfire411LEVEL 94

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where
Where was it that I've already been,
where is it that i need to go
to shed a lifetime of shame and sin
tell me just where for I do not know
will you take my hand and lead me there,
to this place of forgiving love
to this place i need free from dispair
will you fly me there on wings of a dove
who was it I turned to before
there was no-one to help me through
who will come forth to show me more
that beyond heaven there lies a new
a heavenly savior so I am told
by the angels messengers that came
darkened path no longer I'm scold
dispair forgotten and at last no shame

sorry if this don't make much sense been up all night couldn't sleep....hahahahahah

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HEY IT'S ME
There is a place I used to dream about,
long ago and far away
I used to dream someday I would go,
but that was long ago and now to far away
Times in life I'd sit and reminisce awhile
So long ago from this day
I used to be young and wild back then
But that was long ago and gone away
There is a time I used to be the one
To stand up and face the world and say
Hey it's me, I've got something to say
I stand here on my own
And face whatever comes my way
Cause I am strong and I'm here to stay
No matter what I won't back down
And I will always land flat on my feet
There are moments in your life
You feel time slipped away
And you wonder where it has gone
But there is no turning back now
And that this is all you want to say
Hey it's me, Ive got something to say
I stand here on my own
And face whatever comes my way
Cause I am strong and I'm here to stay
No matter what I won't back down
And I will always land flat on my feet
2001

starfire411LEVEL 94

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

most of these may not be long enough for a song but it may help to blend with what you already have or be able to add to these, or at least I hope it does..use them in anyway that helps you out that is the whole purpose i wanted to share them so that someone may be able to make use of them....

starfire411LEVEL 94

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

I will be posting some more probably tomorrow.......

starfire411LEVEL 94

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WHAT IF
Years have gone
since those days he still recalls
wonderin to himself
What if.........
If he could go back in time
knowing what he knows now
would it make a difference?
or would it be the same as now
to late to change the way things are
but hey, oh hey, what if.....
Tired lines reflect back
from the mirror he gazes
wishing for younger days
oh no....but.....what if......
If he could go back in time
knowing what he knows now
would it make a difference?
or would it be the same as now
to late to change the way things are
but hey, oh hey, what if.....
Lying in his bed
he began his journey back
through time knowing all
and so what if....he did
He went back through time
knowing what he knows now
did it make a difference somehow
is it the same now as was then?
not to late to change the way things were
and lord, you know he did, just think what if.......?

i know this one partly makes some sense but maybe it will be a good start to a song coz everyone wonders that all the time....to go back in time and so on....

starfire411LEVEL 94

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BEEN WORKING ON A FEW NEW ONES WILL POST THEM IN A DAY OR SO.....

gigibellaLEVEL 85

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wow, i had no idea you had so much writing talent.... these are fantastic.. i will definitely be back to try some of these lyrics to some of the ss house band tracks!!!! Thank you for sharing the link! keep up the amazing work on your pages... really impressive

starfire411LEVEL 94

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I HAVE SOME MORE THAT I HAVE BEEN WORKING ON......WILL POST AS SOON AS THEY ARE DONE OR AT LEAST AS MUCH AS I CAN GET DONE....HAHAHAHA

starfire411LEVEL 94

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SHE-DEVIL
Well lookout ladies here comes trouble,
shakin that thang and makin em see double
Hold tight to your fella's cause she is here to steal your man
better be ready for a fight , you better take your stand
Don't let them angel looks fool ya comin in the door
cause more than love is what she came here for
she's got a smile that lights up a room
but a heart as cold as the ice age doom
I'm tellin you now, you best beware
cause a spell she'll cast with just one glare

She's a she-devil and she's come to feed
casting a devilish spell to every man she meets
she gets what she wants to for fill her every need
then devours their souls and leaves them to bleed
She can't be stopped, no matter how hard you try
she takes what she wants and leaves them to die
a trail of destruction she always leaves behind
Don't say I didn't warn ya or that i even tried

No man left unturned, no heart left unbroken
a little homewrecker, leaves the ladies smokin
Her victims are scattered throughout the land
So I won't tell again better take a stand
Hold tight to your man as she glides by
or she'll take him home just to bleed him dry

She's a she-devil and she's come to feed
casting her spell to every man she meets
she takes what she wants to for fill her need
then devours their souls and leaves them to bleed

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

ACROSS THE WAY
In an old bar down by the bay
I saw an angel across the way
In a glance i fell so deep
But as I approached, I could hear her weep
My heart wore heavy as she spoke
Of how she'd loved an angel she saw across the way
I reached out for her hand and asked her to dance, but sadly she replied:

"There's no more angels for me across the way
Only shattered dreams of yesterday
I once looked across the way
And in a glance I fell so deep
And in a glance it slipped away
So IU hang my heart outside the door
Coz I don't take broken promises of forever love anymore"

Years later in an old bar down by the bay
I saw that angel across the way
She's married now, but I ask her anyway
Would you care to dance with me my angel?
And she looked in my eyes and replied:

"You will always be my angel across the way
No more shattered dreams of yesterday
As I looked back across the way in a glance I knew
My heart don't hang outside that ole door
Cause you're love filled it, through and through
And I love you my husband each day more and more"

Years later in an old bar down by the bay
My angel and I still dance together across the way
Ageless beauty I still hold dear to my heart
Cause forever love will never be apart

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

WISH
I awoke from a dream only to find you not there
I laid upon my pillow as tears rolled from my eyes
A life without you is so hard to bare
and my heartaches so bad since our last goodbye

I got up from my bed with the lights still out
and looked upon the moon and saw a shooting star
Still wondering what the fight was all about
I made a wish as the star fell from afar
and this is what I wished for......

That I could turn back the hands of time
and take back all those things that were said
So you would still be here with me
holding me and loving me the whole night through

Everywhere your face appears, everywhere I see
every time the winds blows I swear it calls your name
I'm crazy about you baby, oh baby please come back to me
and if it makes a difference I'll gladly take the blame

I've tried to call you but I don't know what to say
I'll do anything it takes to get you back again
here I am on bended knees begging you to stay
cause my heart could not take us only being friends
so upon that star this is what I wished for.....

That I could turn back the hands of time
and take back all those things that were said
so you would still be here with me
holding me, loving me forever til time was through....

starfire411LEVEL 94

Edited reply by starfire411GOLD +3

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IF ANYONE HAS POETRY AND WOULD LIKE TO SHARE THEM FOR USE OF SONG WRITERS PLEASE FEEL FREE TO POST THEM HERE....OR IF YOU HAVE BITS OF PIECES AND NEED HELP TO MAYBE COMPLETE OR GET MORE BITS AND PIECES TO WORK WITH PLEASE FEEL FREE TO PM ME....I WILL SEE WHAT i CAN DO WITH THEM...
IF YOU WISH TO SHARE POETRY JUST FOR READING PLEASURE ONLY DRAGON3472 HAS A POST OPEN CALLED
: POET'S CORNER, I AM SURE HE WOULD LOVE TO HAVE YOU SHARE YOUR POEMS THERE, HIS POST IS READING ONLY NOT FOR SONG WRITERS
http://www.singsnap.com/karaoke/forum/topic/b2130704

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

HAVE BEEN WORKING ON SOME, I HAVE SOME SHORT ONES I AM TRYING TO MAKE LONGER, BEEN AWAY FOR A SHORT TIME, BUT WILL TRY TO GET SOME MORE ON AS QUICK AS I CAN....THANKS CINDI

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Hi these are just awesome enjoyed and loved reading em...I will certainly use em or parts of em or ideas of em in songs poems or in writing a story it's so nice to meet someone one else with a very creative mind awesome friend....gonna flag you and hope you dont mind.....stan

starfire411LEVEL 94

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

Hi these are just awesome enjoyed and loved reading em...I will certainly use em or parts of em or ideas of em in songs poems or in writing a story it's so nice to meet someone one else with a very creative mind awesome friend....gonna flag you and hope you dont mind.....stantangee2

that is fine and i am very happy to hear that my poetry may help you with your songs....i am sorry i have not got more back on yet, have been working on the astral theater, and have limited access to another computer at this time.....but i will get more on soon as possible...thank you...cindi

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

FREE ME

I have become the fallen one, I do not wish to be
Send me an angel of mercy, set my sol soaring free
Shower me with heavens tears, cleanse me of all wrongs
Shine your light down upon me, let me hear the angels song

" Let me be nearer to thee, let me sing in an angels choir
For I am here on bended knee, oh god won't you hear my plea
Fly me away wrapped in wings,to that glorious land above
So far away from where I am, no more hurt, only love

Just want to soar with the angels, to kiss the sky
And be trapped in the chains of life no more
Where serenity fills the air, and no more burdens to bare
To be beside thee and walk upon your heavenly shores

" Let me be nearer to thee, let me sing in an angels choir
For I am here on bended knee, oh god won't you hear my plea
Fly me away wrapped in wings,to that glorious land above
So far away from where I am, no more hurt, only love

Free me oh mighty one, free me and let me be

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

DADDY MY TEACHER

From the first time i opened my eyes saw you smiling down at me
I knew you'd be be there for everything I'd need
you taught me to crawl and how to walk
you were there to catch me everytime I would fall

You taught me the basics of how to read and write
Taught me how not to fall when I first rode my bike
Taught me how to be a lady and you kissed heartaches away
Taught me right from wrong, and not to stray
and loved me the same through mistakes I made

Daddy you were my teacher through all the years I grew
A friend when I needed more so than I ever knew
You were always there beside me through life's ups and downs
and I thank you so much for always being around

{DAD SAYING}
"Standing there in your wedding dress all grown up this day
More beautiful than ever with that smile upon your face
Tears rolled down my cheeks as you looked up and said"

Daddy you were my teacher through all the years I grew
A freind when I needed more so than I ever knew
But now I must teach you on how to let go
I may not be your student now but it's time for me to show
Everything you've done for me I'll keep dear to heart
For I'll always be your little girl and nothing will tear that apart

WRITTEN 2000

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

A VALENTINE ANNIVERSARY

OH MY DEAREST DARLING ONE
I COME TO KNEEL BEFORE THEE
AND BE WITH YOU TIL TIMES DONE
TO SPEND OUR 50TH ANNIVERSARY

I PLACE THIS ONE SPECIAL RED ROSE
AND CANDIED HEARTS AT YOUR SIDE
THE SAME KIND WHEN I PURPOSED
AND SAID I DO TIL THE DAY I DIED

A LIFETIME OF HAPPINESS AND LOVE
YOU GAVE ME IN EACH AND EVERY WAY
BUT YOU'VE GONE TO HEAVEN ABOVE
ONE YEAR AGO THIS VERY DAY

I HOPE THAT YOU WILL PROVIDE
AS I GIVE MYSELF TO THEE
TO BE THERE ONCE MORE AT YOUR SIDE
FOR ETERNAL YEARS OF ANNIVERSARIES

ON FEBRUARY 14TH A SPECIAL VALENTINES DAY
AS THE CHURCH BELLS RANG ADRIFT
AN OLE WEIRY MAN PASSED AWAY
AND AT LAST GOT HIS VALENTINE GIFT

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My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

THIS ONE IS MORE OF A POETIC STORY THAT I HAD WRITTEN IN 1998, JUST THOUGHT I WOULD SHARE IT IN CASE SOMEONE MIGHT GET IDEAS FOR A SONG OR A STORY FROM IT.....IT WAS ONE OF MY BEST AT THAT TIME, SO I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND ME SHARING THIS ONE:

VIRTUAL DREAM ESCAPE
Imagine in your mind a barefoot stroll along a mid summer beach upon tan swirls of grain
Your feet slowly sink into the warm grains of sand as if walking on gritty clouds of cotton
A tropical breeze twisted salty crisp winters breath blows a sense of a gentle spring rain
Relaxation sets in and untangles the nerves clearing the mind to visualize a dream forgotten

A slight chill slivers down your spine as you rest near the warmth of a campfire, a devils spit
Tantalizing smell from the embers of the devils spit burns fierce off the deadened wood that lay
popcorn sparks jump from bark to bark as if in a ritual dance from the depth of the fiery pit

Seagulls cry out skimming over the rustling leaves upon their perch from a distance afar

The waves crash against the blackened, jagged rocks scattered about as the mighty ocean roars
Whistling wind from afar battles against the oceans rage of human errors that fill it's womb
The creatures of the deep gasp for survival as their eerie cry reaches to the edge of the shore
Nature orchestrates sounds to create a symphony that can soothe away emotional gloom

The waves arms grasp for the shore as they leave tiny offerings from its deepest treasures
Variegated shells once held natures birth now roughly lace the trim of it's mothers skirt
Their skeleton hollows imprison sounds of the womb echoing the state of embryo's pleasures
Grassy moss browned by by its failure to survive lay like scattering hair in the wind upon the skirt

Dusk begins its descent as the sun fades slowly sinking into the edge of the oceans reach
A canvas of soft pastel colors splash across the sky darkening upon suns vanished phase
A quilt sews itself from the canvas stitched a dark blue with millions of tiny stars in its breach
Rocketing starbursts shoot across the sky like a cannon streaming a silvery dust trail of haze

The surface of the ocean becomes a mirrored image of the alterations of the evening sky
Its face covers in a multi-colored rug shimmering of silver Christmas tinsel scattered about
The moon appears taking the night watch showering rays of light reflecting a ghostly deny
As stars perform a cast of Roman times of ancient heroes honored in heavens starry route


Father time slows his pace to cherish the moment of peacefulness of the mid summer night
Nevertheless; the night begins its closure as dawn comes calling once more for the sun to rise
The pastel canvas of morn is hung as the pearls of morning dew kiss upon the earthly sight
The crisp salty winters breath blows an awakening greeting to the dawn of a new day lies

The devils spit dries and withers leaving a summons of a smokey descent in the sand
With it goes all the stress leaving a sense of being held a child in mothers arms safely assured
Silence of the world caught in time shatters as natures predators awake taking over the land
but a virtual dream escape waits at anytime when madness can no longer be endured

i know it is long and overly done but back in a writing class in college she had me challenge myself and well it come out this way...lol
but just thought i would throw it on here to see, maybe someone can use it somehow...

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Reply by starfire411GOLD +3

My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

hahahahaha...it will be Halloween soon so heres one I forgot about...short though but it might work for a Halloween challenge song if you add sound effects or more words...but overlook the he_ _ word..i never could put cursing in writing....sounds weird but i guess something happened when i was younger and must have gotten in a whole heap of trouble or something.....lol...i know its silly but can't help it....hahahaha...anyway here goes......

EVIL MANS DESTINY

In the still midst of night for past the stroke of twelve
Slaves of he_ _ dance until the light in silent rage to free themselves
Rusted chains rattle an eerie sound and evil screams shriek throughout
Cemeteries with bodies in the ground awake and unleash a humans doubt
Perched upon a fierce black stallion a beast like form known as Death master
Dripping of blood a golden medallion worn around the neck of a spell caster
The destiny of all mankind may soon be on the journey
Of the valley of death to find their souls to wonder endlessly for all eternity

sometimes i wonder about my over active imagination....hahahahahaha

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Reply by starfire411GOLD +3

My moms been in the hospital but doing better now so i will be back this evening

working on trying to finish the playlists at the astral theater concert hall, then i will get back here and put a few more on.....thanks for your patience....but i do hope that these are helping anyone with songs or stories or whatever they are working on

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