Originals & Song Writers' Corner

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KarinKoLEVEL 79

Edited post by KarinKo

I have seen several personal posts about originals, poetry and song writers, but I didn't find a topic to get it all together. So it's my idea to do that here.

Do you want to share and promote your poetry? Do you want to share lyrics you wrote to a track by the SingSnap Houseband? Did you create a musical track and do you need lyrics? Or maybe you composed a complete new original song?

Then I invite you to post it here and maybe tell us something about it.

Tips, questions and feedback are welcome too!

KarinKoLEVEL 79

Reply by KarinKo

Here is my own first entry. It's a song I recently wrote for a contest about Looney toons. It uses Blues 5 - Slow Shuffle as a backing track and it describes Jessica Rabbit. The song is called 'Just Drawn That Way'. You can click on the title to listen to my own recording of it.

These are the lyrics:

Just Drawn That Way

Her legs are never ending
She's waisted like a wasp
Just see those boobies bouncing
And did you see that dress?

She looks like Rita Hayworth
Lauren Bacall inspired her too
With Veronica Lake's hair
She just is the perfect brew

She's the ultimate man's fantasy
But never more becaus'
She loves her honey-bunny
Like no other girl does

She's a true sex symbol
She is a femme fatal
She's Betty Boop's idol
The queen of any ball

She's silky and she's sultry
She knows to sing the blues
And when she throws a look at you
You're blown out of your shoes

She's the ultimate man's fantasy
But never more becaus'
She loves her honey-bunny
Like no other girl does

----
I'm not bad
I'm just drawn that way
----
You don't know
How hard it is
To be a woman
Looking the way I do
----

Her kisses are like candy
They stick to you like glue
You better treat her nice
Or she might trap you with her boobs

She's not bad, she's just
Drawn that way
Hard to be a woman
Looking that way

She's the ultimate man's fantasy
But never more becaus'
She loves her honey-bunny
Like no other girl does

ImaChristian2

Reply by ImaChristian2 +2

OK! My work below is called:

I'd Rather pay My Boyfriend
(She coughs and coughs and coughs)

Excuse me please. (Clears throat)
I'd Rather Pay My Boyfriend

The title you see, for this poem above,
The poems down below, confusing, I love.
People may stop, and call me a troll,
The title has nothing to do with this scroll,
We've had them before, they lack and they bore.
But no matter what, there always comes more.
I usually stop, cause I like to rhyme.
But misdiagnosed, more like it this time.
I don't like to type, or think up dumb words.
I'll drink a whole fifth! And go back for thirds!
Violets are blue, ya know what? Instead?
Think this time I'll pass,,
On the "poetry" thread.
I'll leave this last thing! That you ought to know!
It's easy to rhyme, but not every thing has to rhyme.

By Ima LOL LOL!

Steve-GLEVEL 90

Reply by Steve-GCHAT-ADMIN

I tried it on the sofa
I tried it on the chair
I tried it up against the wall
but couldn't get it there
I tried every which way I could
and it really made me laugh
I tried every way I could
to get your photograph.

KarinKoLEVEL 79

Reply by KarinKo

I like the fun that you put in your poems, keep them coming!

Anna-ReaLEVEL 97

Reply by Anna-ReaGOLD +3

Still sick , I tried to get in some listens today but head was spinning and hurting so back to bed

You can peek in the windows ,
of my heart ,
you'll love what's there ,
You know what you'll see ?
That's where my smiles begin ...
and the shine in my eyes ,
You'll also understand ,
the touch of my hand ,
You'll see my soul ...
and where my words become so wise ...
I don't mind ,
if you spend a lot of time ,
there peeking at my heart ...
I'll leave the curtains open ,
and open the window someday ...

ImaChristian2

Reply by ImaChristian2 +2

Peeking in windows, now thats just insane,
The only thing I'd see is jail again!
Windows are made, for us to look out,
So we can avoid, what Steve pointed out. (LOL)
Think of a camera, and setting real still,
Then comes a shutter, and feeling a thrill! (LOL)
You may think of curtains, and ending it all,
Look in from a ladder, look out when you fall.
Then comes the time, you think of things past,
Homeowners prepared, and loud shotgun blasts.
Don't raise your hands, high in treetops,
Your window will shatter, from bullets of cops.
Alas, I must go, and fetch my boss dinner.
If this is a contest, Ima's clear winner!!

ImaChristian2

Reply by ImaChristian2 +2

You can peek in the windows ,

...Anna-Rea

Yes. But I can't see myself doing that. LOL

KarinKoLEVEL 79

Reply by KarinKo

Peeking in windows, now thats just insane,
The only thing I'd see is jail again!
ImaChristian2

You might yet once try
And to your surprise
You might find no jail
But more freedom inside

Anna-ReaLEVEL 97

Edited reply by Anna-ReaGOLD +3

Still sick , I tried to get in some listens today but head was spinning and hurting so back to bed

You can peek in the windows ,

...Anna-Rea

Yes. But I can't see myself doing that. LOLImaChristian2

its not a window in my home , its the windows of my heart ,

if you think about it , the heart is a complex set up , not only medically but with different area's for love and other emotions , sorrow , pain , etc etc ... those are the windows I refer to

ImaChristian2

Reply by ImaChristian2 +2


its not a window in my home , its the windows of my heart ,

if you think about it , the heart is a complex set up , not only medically but with different area's for love and other emotions , sorrow , pain , etc etc ... those are the windows I refer toAnna-Rea

Profound.
Well time for me to get to my "Session", I'm so excited, its INK BLOT day! Yesterday was documentation of normal/abnormal response and reply. Much like the game, Family feud, My "Friend" Dr.Relaxant, gave me a word to answer with its opposite. Coincidentally he gave me the word "Window" and I came up with "Door". Referring to, that, which, at this very moment, is about to hit me in the azz, cause I'm outta here! Thanks for the experience!